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Page 3 of CaptainRedfox oneshot
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nunchaku Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Professional Artist
I really like your color palette:).
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YelZamor Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
S uma soiti. Vsye eti stranichki bezumno krasiviye.
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gingertom84 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Look at what you did and look at what I did before! [link] Such coincidence! :D You did a better job of course!
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flamer3d Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful. When's the comic coming out... How can it be acquired/Purchased?
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dreamercal Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student Filmographer
Great stuff! There are a few wording mistakes though. I love the coloring!
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Zazu75 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow the last panel is goreous
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AngelicLionheart Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm digging the art a lot, but the lack of proper translation is very noticeable.

I'd be willing to re-word every page, if you'd like. It's not much dialog and I really like the art.

Cheers!
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Hellstern Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012
If you have time to edit the dialogues - you're welcome!
Just PM me when done.
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auroreblackcat Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
These pages are SO awesome !!! *__*
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herrTevik Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012
I was going to comment on the grammar, but it seems the lady is capable of sorting it out.

Superb drawing and colouring. I like the style.
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laydeepunch Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
As much as I love the art I can't help but notice that the script needs just very slight tweaks; mostly to do with the dialogue which is a bit 'chokey' (it loses fluency sometimes) and lacks some punctuation in places- basically it could do with a good editor, other than that everything else is brilliant! : )
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scourge-minion Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I had only a couple of hours to translate it from Russian and adapt for balloons
and yes, we're not native speakers and need a good editor )
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laydeepunch Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
I'm a native speaker but I grew up in Ukraine and my Russian is fluent, so I definitely know where you're coming from. Living in England does help on this front.
If you don't find anyone I'm always willing to help you out )).
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scourge-minion Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
thanks!
that's a really big problem for both of us, as we use English language only for translating our comics and never use it in our work\everyday life e.t.c.
so if you are willing to help, we'll be most appreciated! ^_^
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laydeepunch Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
I'm lucky enough to be fluent in both at a really comfortable level. It's actually even easier for me to translate from Russian to English because I use English much more (but always have my mum at hand to help with Russian grammar, which, as we both know, is evillllll!).
If you need any editing or translating, just let me know!
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scourge-minion Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
thanks a lot!
[link] this is russian variant of the dialogues
if you see any mistakes, feel free to send me amendments. Thanks!
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laydeepunch Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
I'll be having a good lookie-over these tonight and translate tomorrow morning. I did my bike test today and 6 hours of riding has killed me, so I'll get back to you once I've had some sleep xD.
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