As much as I love the art I can't help but notice that the script needs just very slight tweaks; mostly to do with the dialogue which is a bit 'chokey' (it loses fluency sometimes) and lacks some punctuation in places- basically it could do with a good editor, other than that everything else is brilliant! : )
I'm a native speaker but I grew up in Ukraine and my Russian is fluent, so I definitely know where you're coming from. Living in England does help on this front. If you don't find anyone I'm always willing to help you out )).
thanks! that's a really big problem for both of us, as we use English language only for translating our comics and never use it in our work\everyday life e.t.c. so if you are willing to help, we'll be most appreciated! ^_^
I'm lucky enough to be fluent in both at a really comfortable level. It's actually even easier for me to translate from Russian to English because I use English much more (but always have my mum at hand to help with Russian grammar, which, as we both know, is evillllll!). If you need any editing or translating, just let me know!