The design is gorgeous and the story gets interesting, but the dialogues are so messy it can't be taken seriously. There are mistakes, incoherences, and flat-out "engrish" sentences... Damn shame, it's a nice oneshot project!
Ok thank you! It was done as a presskit and not suppose to being published. Though i'm not a native speaker i'll find a corrector and then just reupload files.
It was done as a presskit and not suppose to being published.
Though i'm not a native speaker i'll find a corrector and then just reupload files.